Saturday 1 November 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 9 by Dongmin

One day after swimming I was trying to open a pickle jar.  So I tried and tried but I could not open the jar!  So I made my cat scratch the jar to open it.  It didn't work.  I used an axe, a knife and a saw to break open the jar.  But all I did is cur my finger off... "AAAAAAAA!!!!!!" 

Later that day...
"You pickle jar are going to be opened!"  I found a broken stick it was green like a pickle... "I want a pickle!!!!"  I lifted the jar up and I dropped it, it opened!!

1 comment:

  1. Wow! You had to work very hard to get a pickle! You used conversation very well to tell this story. I am glad that you finally got the jar opened!
    Well done.

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