Friday 7 November 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 10 by Abigail

One day a puppy named Cuddles and her family were walking down a path in the forest. It got dark and as it shivered, they heard a mysterious sound. It was coming from behind them. The sound sounded like a car screeching to a stop. It was very loud. The screeching sounded like a kid screaming because a car drove over it's toe, and the car slammed on the breaks.  Cuddles ran into the woods.  In one year she was found again. The family was still laying on the path waiting for Cuddles to return. The noise was still there. It was a...

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  1. You described the mysterious sound very well. I also like that there was a happy ending for Cuddles and its family!
    Well done!

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