NOT SO BRIGHT JACKSON
Once there was a little boy named Jackson.Jackson loved fall.He’s whole room was covered with leaves.Maple leaves,big leaves,small leaves.One day Jackson was playing outside.He was jumping in leaves,stacking leaves even raking leaves.But as the leaves rustled around the yard Jackson heard a weird sound “SNAP”!!! “SNAP”!!! “SNAP”!!! What was that?Mumbled Jackson with FRIGHT!!! It could be a dinosaur or a donkey or a Bunny!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE !!! Yelled Jackson.So Jackson ran under his bed.And lived there for the rest of the whole whole year.
Well done Adam. I wonder what it was in the leaves? I love some of your language, like mumbled and yelled, but next time, remember to check your speech punctuation carefully. I love your repetition in sentences, and think you should be very proud of this writing - well done!
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