Friday 21 November 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 12 by Kennedy

The Very Mysterious Thing

He was shocked to find a baby fawn sleeping In the bottom of the sack. As The Lord of Nulth reached in and was about to transform the baby fawn into a robot guard, the fawn woke up and pranced around filling the city with creativity and imagination making all the robot guards real animals again. The Lord of Nulth was furious and tried to make his spider guards turn them robotic again but he failed. So the real animals declared a war on the spider gaurds. The animals agreed to if they win The Lord Of Nulth will disappear forever, and if he wins they will turn into guards again. The good animals won and The Lord of Nulth disappeared forever.

2 comments:

  1. Laurie (Team 110WC)23 November 2014 at 11:55

    That fawn was very powerful, Kennedy! I really love the line "pranced around filling the city with creativity and imagination" because it helped me picture it happening! I think that there were rainbows too! Keep up the great writing!

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  2. Hello Kennedy,
    I really enjoyed your response! My favorite part was when you said the fawn filled the city with creativity and imagination. What wonderful things to have in your town! I am really impressed with your sentence structure. Thanks for sharing!
    Kristen (100WC Team)
    Watsonville, California

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