Once upon a time there was a green cat named Broken. Broken loved lifting sumo wrestlers then throwing them off airplanes to go skydiving. But one day Broken was lifted by a evil baby named Milk. Broken wasn't sure why an evil baby was lifting him so Broken made a run for it.
The evil baby was chasing him and saying "goo goo gah gah!"
Broken was trapped, "there's no way out!" Then Broken had an idea. So he jumped and started swimming until he got to shore. "I made it!" yelled Broken. So Broken went home and took a bath.
Your story is very exciting! You created suspense through your well-sequenced events. I was glad to see that Broken got away.
ReplyDeleteWell done!