"My swimming pool!" I yelled as a sumo wrestler jumped on it and broke it. He lifted up our house and y dad was dangling from it. My dad was holding my green, blue, yellow and purple cat.
Daddy fell and shouted, "Me broken me leg".
I knew that was bad grammar but dad always got angry when I tell him that he used bad grammar. I saw the sumo wrestler and he threw my bed. It whizzed past me. Just then Barney came and the sumo wrestler fled. Barney gave me a present. It was a Xbox 360.
Caleb - that sumo wrestler was very strong! I think you deserved an XBox 360 after that experience!
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Caleb,
ReplyDeleteHow strong and big was the sumo wrestler?! This was a really enjoyable 100WC to read- and you used spelling, punctuation, grammar and descriptive language correctly and effectively.
Well done.
Emily, Team100