One day I was walking in the forest. I heard a noise, it was Elmo!! He shot me with his magical powers. I was blind! What was I going to do? I couldn't go play a staring contest or play eye spy. I was doomed. I asked this old man "what should I do?"
"Well, there's only one way." He replied as he hit me in the head with his cane!
Suddenly, I was able to see again! I told myself never to go in the woods with Elmo, it's very dangerous. So I headed home never to return again.
Dear Aidan,
ReplyDeleteWell done you used punctuation well. Please check the sentence that begins.. I couldn't go play..
Good luck with the next 100WC.
Regards
Miss Evangelou (Team 100)