Saturday 18 October 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 7 by Adam

Once there was a little girl named Chloe the stinky girl.  Everyone calls her that at school because once Chloe walked into the stinky cave of doom.  And you know what they say if you take one tiny step in the stinky cave of doom you're doomed forever!  Chloe didn't believe in that stuff. So one of her friends made a bet.  They bet that if Chloe could prove that the stinky cave of doom was false, she would get $20.  Chloe thought this would be an easy deal.  When Chloe took one step inside the stinky cave she said, "I could not believe the smell..."
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  1. Unknown18 October 2014 at 15:32

    Well done. Good, creative writing with some interesting ideas.
    This is a well told story that you build up well using good imagination.
    Sentences and punctuation are developing well.

    Keep up the good work!

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