Friday 3 October 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 5 by Gabriel

I was walking in the forest when I saw a random paper, I picked it up as I looked around I felt a chill run down my spine. I ran back to the house but I felt like i was being followed. I looked behind me but no one was there. I walked and walked but I could not find my house so I ran into a school and there I could find someone.  A tall suited man was inside and I asked him where could I find a map. He turned around, he had NO face and his skin was white!

1 comment:

  1. Your story makes a chill run down my spine, too. You have left me very interested to find out what happens with the man with NO face! Your writing is descriptive and suspenseful.
    Well done!

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