Saturday 6 December 2014

100 Word Challenge - Week 14 by Erica

Once there was a guy named Lim who was an old man.He worked on a ship that was very old.It was brown,30ft high. Once they went to the middle of the ocean.then one afternoon the waves were shaking.Little waves were moving really fast! They got bigger.Well not as big as the ship.the waves started at 5:00pm,and stopped at 6:00pm so 1hour.good thing there was no lightning.Finally they made it to where they are suppose to be. THE END!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Erica
    I am glad that the waves didn't get bigger than the ship! You have added some details to help us visualize the ship.
    Well done!

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